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breeze by raun breeze by raun
like a cold summerbreeze, right? I made this one some months ago. Dont know what to think of it. I like the light and expression, but the jewelry and green top is unfortunate, right? what else is wrong? :-)
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mindsecho Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2006
but i think it was better if you didn't elevate the lightning levels
taiyoo-wa-shinanai Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2006
perect light
vivacebobagem Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2006
this looks really good small, but you're right about the unfortunate jewelry. It's a little bit awful.
worldchaos Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2005
I love over exposed photographs, especially when they are done so well.

Im going to go out and shoot everythin +2 EV tomorrow and see what I get.
23blackroses Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2005
I think it's immaculately done! So beautiful...
The lighting is just precious! Like a perfect winter.
Although the poncho shirt thing doesn't place...she should have worn a corset or a nice lacey to portray the elegance in her face and the whole shot.
Awesome job tho! *fav*
verlang Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2005
just perfect!!!! love it... :clap:
LeandrasStock Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2005   Photographer
I don't think there's something wrong with it!
the fact that theres no contrast at all makes it kind of cotton-like,smooth and her hair looks like feathers.
I like it all in all-Can't give you any other critic to this.
awesome shot :heart:
Turkish-Romeo-BoY Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2005
lovely contrast and colors
Great shot
Rubarb Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2005
Beautifully done!
PerfectAtom Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2005
Nice, fabulous light

"98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature"

wow some else that hasent tried pot
albertofoto Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2005
This odd color palette, this strange angle, this hairstyle (good) and this mood in her makes this model portait one of the most beauty things here in DA.
c o n g r a t u l l a t i o n s !!!
LanimilbuSx Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2005   Photographer
Wow. The perfect image of innocence.
Rondeaux Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
I think your model is superb and I can't find anything wrong with your work.
austinslide Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2005
I cant see ANYTHING wrong with this. Its beautiful. :+fav:
fallencupid Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2004
like many others have said, she does look angelic the way the light is shining around her, giving a heavenly aura. :floating: absolutely gorgeous. :+fav:
eowyntje Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2004
stunning photo
yonix Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2004
Pure brill! Love the monochromatic scheme going light...:+fav:
reallifeistoflat Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2004   Photographer
i dont think anything is wrong ... the fact that there is a flaw makes it that much better
good lighting and the hair is neat
sleurope Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
really great =)
nevaira Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
great photo, though i agree with you on the jewelery and the thingy she is wearing underneath.
you asked what else... when you look at her sweater in full view, in her left side there is this hairy piece... dont really like that, bit disturbing.
for the rest of it, i love it :D
garbageoftruth Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2004
I would say winter, not summer. :gummybear:
njk Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004   Photographer
super-hyper-fantastic. lights, the feeling of coldness and of course the model. stunnin :deviation:
AntekPyra Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
there is nothing wrong
perfect light and a great model

i tried to turn it in b/w...i think it looks even better ;)
saciii Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2004  Professional Photographer
the light, the colors and the expression are great,...

buit yeah.... I suppose the jumper isn't completely befitting...or is it the bra strap?


lovely work anway :)
aleksandra Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2004  Professional Photographer
Wow, beautiful photo :)
b4u Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2004
she looks so GOOD!!!!
escapism Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2004
This is incredible! The shimmering of the hair, the paleness of it all, the light colored eyes, the simple makeup - everything is gorgeous! The lighting is just incredible!
Mind if I ask how you actually got the lighting on this one?
raun Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2004
hi and thanks for your kind comment :-) The lighting was not too complicated. I used a golden reflector screen infront of her, and from behind (firing up from the floor) I used a wireless SB800 flash, set to full discharge (or whats the english word for it :giggle:). I brightened up the photo using levels in photoshop.
deepColor Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2004
:wow: It's beautyful! I like them!
space Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
wow that looks wonderful. At first I was, so to say, blinded by the light, but then I read your comment with the green top and the earings, and now I agree with you, they shouldn't be there :) but damn nice shot
foureyes Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2004
Arggg Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2004
Pretty cool photo! the reflex on her hair is amazing! I can bear the top but the necklace, don't know why, but I would prefer without it (usually I like'em... )
You say this was spontaneous?! What were you doing for her to look at you like that?! :? You had your clothes on... right?! :evillaugh:
tohappiness Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2004
Wow absolutely wonderful! The lighting makes it look as though shes descending from heaven. Wonderful effect with her hair. I love it.
s-ymphonic Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2004
Looks very godlike and angelic

Great Job ;)
buildingclimber Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2004
Superb delightful ..wonderful lighting and expression .:+fav:
bka-ratte Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2004
nice soft and bright photo....

but I think her 'look' is a bit probably my opinion is wrong ;)
suzi9mm Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004   Photographer
looks VERY cool. kinda fashion mag like :) i really like the cool brightness and her serious expression. the eyes are great but the face are and esp. the eyes look digitally altered, did u fix something, use neat image or is it just me?? anyways very cool and stylish...keep it up :thumbsup:
littleredelf Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004
she's an ethereal angel . . .
the smoky eye makeup, fly away hair
& tipped expression are really wonderful.
my only agreed complaint
is the silvery line of jewelry
peeking out from the sweater
the green (which i don't realy see) is fine
just that horizontal line in the left field
just above her shoulder seems a distraction:
it puts a bar, a, linear, masculine, finite shape
in a very dreamy, gauzy photo.
Zlatty Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004  Professional Photographer
Neat exposure ... dig the overexposure and her expression ... neat work
welder Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004
Your portrait work keeps amazing me more and more. This is such and amazing image. Fantastic backlighting behind her hair, beautiful tone in the whole photo...almost heavenly. I can see nothing wrong with this. :+fav:
aquapell Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2004
beautiful hi key :+fav:
krey Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
Like the neutral colours & backlighting , her hair color just flows right into it . Awesome eyes too , but ya got a weird angle going on here , or maybe there's a little bit too much negative space on the left that accentuates the angle , maybe try a tighter crop ? Eliminate that board on the wall , and the bra strap too if ya can , distracting . Still a striking & emotional shot , I need to play more with harsh light like this , can't hurt me , right .
darkened-flame Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
I like hte way the jewelry shines and glimmers. If by green top you mean the thing she has under the shirt then yes - that is quite unfortunate. Would look much better if it was just that lace top. composition and focus are correct - but the lighting is just fantastic. As is the hair (like i said in acomment like 3 minutes ago)

I really dont notice that much wrong with it - really just the green top. Id say unsharpen her necklace a tad cuz it doesnt fit in with the smoothness of everything else - but otherwise its spectacular. I really this shot.
fili Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
technically - top class.
nathanieljc Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
Um wow. Love the hair and head tilt. You always find some great locations.

The green top isn't too noticeable, and the necklace isn't bad. But yeah, don't like the earring. I've made a note to myself to not allow jewelry unless it is key to the shot.
moandreamer Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
i LOVE this.. you once again impress with your capture Lars.

zort Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
i love this one... :)
NoirFeu Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
well, i think that nothing is wrong. for me this photo is divine and perfect xD
i just love gentle and bright colours of it - and the model, she looks just like an angle - great hair and expression of her face, so inaccessity!
your works never cease to amaze me :heart:
BurntSorrow Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004   Photographer
Really love the colors in that pic. It's a great piece of work, it really is ;) :)
bada Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2004
Really beautiful shot. Love the way her hair is! So lovely! :clap:
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