Looks great!
I couldn't possibly read the words for the life of me... maybe I'm a slow reader but they go by too fast for me.
Besides that, I like it Great pictures, too.

This is amazing. What a great series of pictures and the words do ring true to me as I have thought similar things in the search for my own personal developent.

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I havnt seen much else liek this especialy in this form of art. Its really interestign and appealing. Awsome work.

Great work! Watching it really captures the eye. However if I may be so bold there are three things id change. I have no experience with flash yet I have done a fair bit of video editing so id like to think I know a little bit about it. Tell me if I’m wrong.
1st off, the text fades out to fast. If it could pause for a full second it would be perfect. You can read it just fine, because you typed and worked with it, but others who are unfamiliar with it can't read it as fast as you.
2nd, the sudden frame changes in between the pictures doesn’t look so great beside the slow fade of the text. Have the pictures fade into each other at the same speed of the text, it will enhance the onerous, melancholy feel of the entire work I promise!
3rd, this is a more personal point but I watched it the second time with a choice musical piece in the background. 'Like Spinning Plates' by Radiohead from their album 'Amnesiac' enhanced the dark feeling of the work 100fold, plus it synched up very nicely, I know you cant put copyrighted music on Deviant but try it for yourself and see.
Non the less! Great work! If that’s your first you have a promising talent!
~Lukas,

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The words were too fast.But I read as good as i could.The clouds and landscape were so pretty.

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perfect. powerful words for powerful images, all I can suggest is to somehow make a smoother transition with each image. well done

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Wow... the images are just breathtakingly beautiful, and the words...

Rebecca

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just wow, nothing else. +fav, i love it

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It's really splendid !!
It's a good news that image ready can export to .swf, i'd like to be able to do the same...
Would you make a tutorial ?

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i hadn't seen any flash other than using vectors (or a least, in an illustrative fashion) and this is great. i love it. i think another deviant mentioned the sudden changes between images...maybe some sort of slow fade between the changes in the sky would make it flow better, or bringing in a sudden flash that links the two images, fading them both in and out of white, to get the effect that your eyes see when you have just been blinded by flash and your vision slowly returns....

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